Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Story line to black and white


Black and White will be my next script. That will not be the name to it either. The film has three characters. Ben: who thinks he's black, Jordan: with OCD, and Ariella: who's not attractive but acts if like she is. Conflict Ben and Jordan's bro friendship get in the way of wanting the girl.

Character Names

Paul - Ben
Sam - Jordan
Diana - Ariella

Paul: Cocky, not smart, thinks with his dick, talks shit, cares about being a friend, thinks he's black

Sam: Sometimes Self centered, Reasonable thinker, has bad OCD sometimes. Obsessed with Ice cream

Diana: Cares about her poodle a lot, stuck up, sassy, over dramatic, wants treated right (Hold the door for me), thinks she owns the world (rude) - doesn't watch where she's going, ohh he shouldn't be in my way-

Paul and Sam both go after the girl and end up realizing there friendship is more important. Shows the stupidity of love in humour. .

rough draft start

Walking through the hood


Sam
 you know what we need?

Paul
What man?

Sam
 ice cream

Paul
You always want ice cream

Carry on from there. Make three plots and story intersect so you write towards goal

Next I write an extended outline


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