Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Story line to black and white


Black and White will be my next script. That will not be the name to it either. The film has three characters. Ben: who thinks he's black, Jordan: with OCD, and Ariella: who's not attractive but acts if like she is. Conflict Ben and Jordan's bro friendship get in the way of wanting the girl.

Character Names

Paul - Ben
Sam - Jordan
Diana - Ariella

Paul: Cocky, not smart, thinks with his dick, talks shit, cares about being a friend, thinks he's black

Sam: Sometimes Self centered, Reasonable thinker, has bad OCD sometimes. Obsessed with Ice cream

Diana: Cares about her poodle a lot, stuck up, sassy, over dramatic, wants treated right (Hold the door for me), thinks she owns the world (rude) - doesn't watch where she's going, ohh he shouldn't be in my way-

Paul and Sam both go after the girl and end up realizing there friendship is more important. Shows the stupidity of love in humour. .

rough draft start

Walking through the hood


Sam
 you know what we need?

Paul
What man?

Sam
 ice cream

Paul
You always want ice cream

Carry on from there. Make three plots and story intersect so you write towards goal

Next I write an extended outline


Monday, June 24, 2013

Black and White

Is another film I will do this summer. This is one of the big ones. I have a lot to film and hopefully get two or three of my films done but I need to work on them everyday. I wrote on the white board tonight and I'll talk more about this one later. There's three characters that's it. A white boy who thinks he's black (Me). A black guy with OCD (Black dude/Jordan Maybe). Girl who's not hot but thinks she is, (Arielle). I need to be writing more.

Sunday, June 23, 2013

Cruise movie

My Mom left on a cruise so ill make a movie about a mom and Dad leaving on a cruise. A kid parties and is bad. But they die before on the ship because it goes down. Then shows tragedy and ends after.

The girl who starred at the boy with blue eyes.

I'm going to describe this film while watching another movie (Lars and the real girl).
 Girl staring out window. Front angle at her. Then shows her hair and what she's looking at towards a black shaded window. She had red window lines. TV is on and shows boy get pushed down by Dad. Girl turns around. She is in the too floor of her house. See's boy get pushed outside. Starts raining she closes her blinds. Walks down stairs says to her Mom. 
Mommy how fan people be so mean?
Mommy 
I don't know how, it's because we are foolish and don't realize how important we are to each other. (Probably switch line from Mom.) goes back upstairs. Boy is on roof under awning. 

She waves her hand. To come to her.
He does not see. 
Mom comes upstairs. It's time for bed honey. You've got to close your blinds. Late at night eyes open she opens her window to see his Dad let him inside.


Ill figure out more. Give me comments


Friday, June 14, 2013

Completed the plot.

So the whole idea of this film will be based on friendship. I'm also going to make my other idea into a short and film it next. Then my christian short next. Then this film. I'll write the summary tomorrow and started it on the white board. I'm excited. It came to me from a night with Paul.

Wednesday, June 12, 2013

I'll write tomorrow.

I'm having lots of trouble because I don't know if I like what I've chosen. Maybe I'll write a short and film it ASAP. I'll write tomorrow. Glad to be back home and ready for some summer films.

Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Just go home and ready to write

Tomorrow will be the first day of starting the script then I;ll write the story and the characters, etc. I'm ready, I'm excited, it was a good vacation thing.

Friday, June 7, 2013

My own version

I can't write cause I'm leaving for the next 4 day. Today I decided I'll write my own version of my idea of the script. The I'll change it. I'm leaving though and already up way to late so I'll do it when I get back. Then on to some bad ass script writing. I really hope I do this, I hope I do.

Some of the drawing board


Thursday, June 6, 2013

White board

I know I keep talking about this script and how I'm going to do it. I'm about to take a trip this Friday so I can't write for a bit. I just bought a white board for film. Ill create the film and dissect my idea on the board. So maybe tonight ill write the idea. Check out the white board for film. I've got some idea's running through my head for other scripts. So much to do.

Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Here we go

Summary
Baseball game lost, Kassie gets into summer relationship, Tiffany gets accepted into her second school
Ben ends up in community college and you feel sorry for him at the end because he realizes he's an ass.
Brad gets baseball scholarship to good school, David goes to Harvard but has to choose his college between his girlfriend.

The Movie:

EXT. Starts out at baseball field - DAY Last practice of the season before the game

Brad
Can You believe where about to graduate

David: Pretty Crazy man

Explains David and Brad and Ben in this scene.

Next Scene Kassie walks outside from house.
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David: Chill, accepts situations, hasn't had girlfriend

Brad: Been with some good girls, no girl friend, tight up, smart

Kassie: Calm, Undiscovered, new to group, slightly slutty

Lina: Wild, adventures, learning, picky with men

Ben: Acts too cool, isn't in a group


"Fast times" style on lives.
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I'll write out the dots tomorrow, script, and start further on the story this is the beginning thoughts on it.

Sunday, June 2, 2013

The story

Tonight I'm going to tell you what I'm doing tomorrow. Tomorrow I'm writing the story then I'm gonna be writing. I'm gonna be radiating this tomorrow too. Life goes on. The film is about the good change of going into college and finishing school but the sadness of leaving others